I give you credit for trying. It's a relatively long animation, but well, the style is very rough and the animation is, too. The music was a wee bit boring, you should have used more different pieces of score, you could have taken the original music for those specific scenes for example.
I'm giving it a save point cuz I think you put quite some work in there, but try and improve it
okay, content-wise this was pretty good, buuuuuut graphic-wise this could use a bit of tweaking, like cleaning cut-out pics and also, the music was very chopped up and suddenly ended at one point.
Basically, good work, but needs tewaking
Alright. Thanks for the hints, and if I ever get around to redoing it, I'll take your advise. This was just something I had stashed, and figured I'd release it, so, I wasn't expecting the best welcome ever, but, you get what you can :)
agrreing with previous comment...
I dont think unfinished flashes fit very well
basically nice style, but very lazy at some parts
and the sync is SO off! it really ruins it
but I think the animation needs improving...
backgrounds look very nice and the stills are okay.
I think this will be a great flash but you need to work hard on it, I think.
Good luck, looking forward to the finished one!
I am amazed as ever
Amazement and envy are one when watching such a fantastic piece of art. The breathtaking scenery just really takes you into the world of Bitey and the others; I do have to agree that this one was different, possibly because it was "just" a music video, with stunning graphics nevertheless, but reduced storyline (I would NOT say there was no storyline, it was more simple, I think)
Anyway, praises to you, oh grand master of the flash *bows in respect*
We shall await your next work in agony and joy
it didnt work?
at least with me all it did was show a picture of some hwite-haired dude, and nothing else happened
I dont know...
this wasnt great at all...
the pics were badly cut out...
except for moving round a little, nothing really happened, image qualities were also pretty lame, and there was no point
I liked the song, but thats about it...
words fail me
never in my life have I seen a video that fit so perfectly!
The music is ... *drool* and that cute little thing that dutifully keeps on smacking in those nails!!
It's adorable, that little thing, whatever it is ^_^
and.. nya.. the way the video fit with the music...
I need a shrine for you in my room ;D
basically, what I want to say...
can we expect more of the cute thing? ;D
Not bad, but...
I think you've got potential there...
but you definitely need to work on those graphics...
they werent bad, but....
simple... oooh so simple...
simple isnt always bad, but that one crossed the line a bit too much.
I would suggest redoing it, using the stick guy as a help for putting something more defined in place.
(just call me Simon... simple Simon ;)
most of it said
Well, most of it's been said, the thing with music or like sounds of the wind (not necessarily of the cracking please) at least.
It does seem a little unrealistic, the way he lies down there, but I think its better that way (cracked up skull=no fun), so I prefer the slight unrealism
the only thing that bothered me about the style is that the lines are very... dirty, kinda? like.. not one clean line. I mean, the simple style absolutely fits, but it seems kinda .. ya.. not cleaned up.
So, I do agree with the rest.. With some sounds or music, and a bit of tweeking on some lines, this would definitely be a really good flash.
Keep working on it! ^_^
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